Thread:IOmqNweGG/@comment-4826222-20190711084437

Hey there!

I noticed that you've become quite active at the wiki. That's great! :)

However, there is something I wanted to ask you concerning your writing style. You're using a very blog-like writing style with a lot of "I"s. In other words, you're always writing from your very own perspective. Nothing wrong with that in general, but for a wiki it sounds very odd. You have to keep in mind that most users don't know who edited a page or when the last edit on a page was. Phrases like "Other healables that I missed." or "Its been off shop for 8 days by the time of writing this." are quite confusing for new readers and can become outdated very quickly.

Please try to use a more objective writing style, similar to a Wikipedia article. Use a general point of view instead of your own - the wiki will be edited by several users after all.

If you have any questions or if anything is unclear, feel free to ask me. Keep up the good work! :)

Best regards, Tess 