User blog comment:The Arcane Blades/Cosmetic Review guidelines/@comment-26443545-20200902121559

You recently as of 10minutes of creating this blog made a Cosmetic review that looked like this: "Castaway Jonesy is a shirtless Jonesy based on the Jonesy featured in the Block party shorts, Desert Island Flare."

Here's a more fluent way you could've made it. (I've fixed the review and added this):
 * The term "Castaway" comes from Jonesy being shipwrecked and stranded on a deserted island. He is seen shirtless and in need of help shooting his flare gun to a Battle Bus travelling above. Accidentally, he blows up the Battle Bus earning him a Victory Royale.
 * Being stranded for an unknown but predictably long period of time, Castaway Jonesy's appearance began to change. His facial hair increased and his clothing became teared.

Are you sure you followed up with your 3 E's? This is a large post you've made. But do you truly dedicate yourself to the meaning of the words you use? I like the posts enthusiasm to give Cosmetic Reviews another try. But for others to feel the way you want the project to become we have to see it first.